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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
要求:
题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
评语:

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

There is a lasted augrement about whether the name is important or not.Of coures,for everybody name is the first great gift we got after we were bron. People always not say the same thing,like this,some people are agree that the name is important,but the other people stand in the opposite.The surpporters think that name is important.First of all,everyone has a name belongs to themselves,it's a symbol to distinguish identify of ours.What's more,we need a name in law to accept many things,such as,id card,report card,driving license and so on.Every coin has two sides,the other people think that name just a code,we needn't to pay more attention to it.Whatever we have a name or not,we always live in happy life. As far as i'm concerned,to konw a people always begins to konw his name,name is necessary in reality that is just a thing i always do,making friends and tell them my name,which is proud of me all the time.

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