拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;有效的运用了一些复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
There is a lasted argument about whether the name is important.Of course.For somebody,name is the best gift we have got after we born. People always not say the same thing,like this,some people are agree that the name is important,but the other people stand in the opposite.The supporters think that name is important.First of all,everyone has a name belongs to themselves and it's a symbol to distinguish identify.What's more,we need a name in law to accept many things,such as,id card,report card,driving license and so on.Every coin has two sides,the other people think that name just a code,we needn't to pay more attentions to it.Whether you have the name,we always live a happy life. As far as i'm concerned,To know a people always begins to know his name,making friends and telling them my name,which is proud of me all the time.