2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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the most interesting think in my hometown is the night life, it is very famous,because so many clue and collage here. and i will take him another place is the goverment square, there are many people dancing there. and the last place I will take him shopping in the downtown, my city is a triditional place, there have special food and sake there, however time is late,but the night market also good.