2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm very pleasant tohear that you are going to visit my hometown,ChongQing.I would like to take you to enjoy a happy holiday in the next few days. Chongqing is an ancient city ,and there are many interesting places,such as Sanxia Square,Ciqikou and so on.I think Ciqikou is a good place that you would like.On the on hand,you can enjoy many special food which are different from American.On the other hand,it has a long history,and you would like the old architectures. I think you would like Chongqing after you visit it.I would like to pick you up whenever you arrive.