小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Jenny is my good friend.She is ten years old,last Sundy I attend her birthday party,She has black long hair and beautiful eyes,dressed a pink skirt and very happy all day. Jenny likes drawing and dancing, she gave me sevral beatiful pictures as present on my birthday. I like them very much!