2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear penfriend, I have this information that you will visit me after our one year chating on the air . Now i am living in Suzhou China , if you would like to visit China ,Suzhou will be the last place you would not to miss. From the history ,Suzhou is fousmous as beautiful girls and many gardens ,if you are here i will lead you to visit one by one . Hope hearing from you earlier.