小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim is my best friend, he has a big family,father,mother, twins brother,and a sister. Jim's father is a doctor,he works in an famous hospital in our city. His mother is a nice lady,she wears a pair of glasses,looks very intelligent. She is a headmaster of a middle school. I often mistake jim's twins brother,they both have golden hair, both like play basketball and swimming, so they always appear in the same occation! and Jim's sister is a beautiful girl, she often flows and asks me:"am I a beauty?"