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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1186[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Hello, everyone. You are welcome. You will join in this trip. Our company is one of the best wonderful trip firm. We will offer well good serves. If you enter to three trip of Beijing Line, we needn't you shopping during this trip. You know, a lot of trip firms always request visitor to shopping during this trip. Bud our company forbid do it. About the Beijing Line, First day, everyone will go to the Zhongshan Park before 11 o'clock on May 1. And we will arrive in Beijing City by high speed train. And then we are going to visit the Beijing Tiananmen Square and the Palace Museum. Second day, we are going to walk the Great Wall. The Last day, we will visit the Beijing University. And then we will go home by plan at 17 o'clock this day. I look forward to enjoying this trip.

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