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Hello, everyone. You are welcome. You will join in this trip. Our company is one of the best wonderful trip firm. We will offer well good serves. If you enter to three trip of Beijing Line, we needn't you shopping during this trip. You know, a lot of trip firms always request visitor to shopping during this trip. Bud our company forbid do it. About the Beijing Line, First day, everyone will go to the Zhongshan Park before 11 o'clock on May 1. And we will arrive in Beijing City by high speed train. And then we are going to visit the Beijing Tiananmen Square and the Palace Museum. Second day, we are going to walk the Great Wall. The Last day, we will visit the Beijing University. And then we will go home by plan at 17 o'clock this day. I look forward to enjoying this trip.
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