文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;学术词汇比较灵活,但文中拼写错误稍多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,many students are not focus on spelling during the time for learn English. With the economy rapidly develop,the more advance technolgy are created the more students rely on eletronic machine.Kinds of students are so lazy that they ignore to spelling.They always just read and see the konwledge as long as they take a book.Since now students can conmunicate with others with telephone and use it daily and they can acmulate konwledge with a eletronic dictionary.So they learn by internet while in daily time they does'n spelling by hand. In my opinons,under the condition student should remove the habit of not focus on spelling.They should cultivate a awareness of the importance of spelling.In daily life,they should learn without telephone or eletronic dictionary.