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We Are What We Read We all say,knowledge is important for us to change our poor life ,but we want to obtain it ,it's neccesary to read,as the title of we are what we read. Undoubtedbly,reading plays an important role on our life,it likes the wings and take us to across the failure,the adversity and so on. When you unsuceessfully finish tasks ,you can feel the sense of frustration and give up youself.But at this time ,you are able to read or remember something about reading ,and you discover that failure happened to some persons who has gained the success,and these great persons not only encourage you to face the failure ,but also make you get the confident once again ,that is to say,reading encourages us. As we all konw,adversity happens to all of us ,on one is exception, adversity leave you doubting youself and you consider that God is your own bosses ,But you know that Helen Keller made an impact on the world despite beeing deaf,dumb,and blind from early age by reading ,which let you find that other person is more unfortune than youself .So you are full of hope in the future ,that is to say, reading inspires us . In a word ,we are what we read ,the best way to receive the courage,the confidence and the inspiring is to read.
