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We are graduating from school soon.I miss so many good friends,especially my best friend--Li Lie.Because he is outgoing very much and he has a lot of hobbies,so he is friendly to others and always helps others.He has a good grade,and often help me in study.I want to give away to him a surprise gift.It express I thanks to him.I hope he will has a wonderful life in the future.Also I hope that we are also friends in the future.