2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Surely,it is general that the shopping on online become more and more popular,but in fact ,as we all known,there are ont only some benefits,but also disadvantages.For intance,if you like shopping on online,something will extremely be more cheaper.what's more ,if you don't have spare time to buy some important thing by yourself,the shopping on online can do be convient.However,on the one hand ,maybe someone will be addicted to the shopping on online ,so lastly ,they spend too much money.On the other hand ,it is bad for our eyes. On my opinion,as long as the shopping on online don't have some influence in your life,you can do it ,but must be suitable.