2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Surely,it is general that the shopping online become more and more popular,but in fact,as we all known,there are ont only some benefits,but also disadvantages.For instance,if you like shopping online,something will extremely be more cheaper.What's more,if you don't have spare time to buy some important thing by yourself,the shopping online can do be convinient.However,on the one hand,maybe someone will be addicted to the shopping online,so lastly,they spend too much money.On the other hand ,it is bad for our eyes. On my opinion,as long as the shopping online don't have some influence in your life,you can do it ,but must be suitable.