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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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It is universally known that it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. There are two reasons for it. For one thing, at some time you can draw wrong conclusions. As an illustration, Confusious misunderstood his student's behaviour because he saw Yan eat rice without permission when cooking. At that time, Confusious thought Yan was a selfish man. However, it was fact that Yan only ate little rice with soil so that others could eat healthily. Apart from that, when others had a meal, Yan did not eat any more. For another, if you rely on what you hear or see to spread around you, you will be considered not to be trusted From what has been discussed above, we know that we are supposed to think seriously, analyze carefully and judge objectively to come up with more reliable conclusions in our daily life.

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