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It is universally known that it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. There are two reasons for it. For one thing, at some time you can draw wrong conclusions. As an illustration, Confusious misunderstood his student's behaviour because he saw Yan eat rice without permission when cooking. At that time, Confusious thought Yan was a selfish man. However, it was fact that Yan only ate little rice with soil so that others could eat healthily. Apart from that, when others had a meal, Yan did not eat any more. For another, if you rely on what you hear or see to spread around you, you will be considered not to be trusted From what has been discussed above, we know that we are supposed to think seriously, analyze carefully and judge objectively to come up with more reliable conclusions in our daily life.
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