拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It is universally known that it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. There are two reasons for it. For one thing, at some time you can draw wrong conclusions. As an illustration, Confusious misunderstood his student Yan Hui because he saw Yan eat rice secretly when cooking. At that time, Confusious thought Yan was a selfish man. However, it was fact that Yan only ate little rice with soil so that others could eat healthily. Apart from that, when others had a meal, Yan did not eat any more. For another, if you always spread your own judgement to individuals around you relying on what you see or hear, you will be considered as an untruly man. From what has been discussed above, we know that we are supposed to think seriously, analyze carefully and judge objectively to come up with more reliable conclusions in our daily life.
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