小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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He coll LiMing,is my nice friend.His hair is long. One day,He took me go to swiming pool to swim.I do not swim,but he is fast in water,and skillful. I said"can you teach me?" "OK."He said.so I am happy very much. I dare to come in swiming pool before go home.