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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
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学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the spectcal development of all over the world,it has been an internet environment.This progress provide us with more conviences.We can take the most affections of the machine for an example--computer. Computer interacts with the human beings every moments.In the company,we have to use the computer to domenstrate our notion or scheme.Because it is the best way to expland the data or resolve the problems.In the school,if the teachers have class by computer to instruct,students can be more efficent and conscientious.In leisure time,we can not only entertain but also get acknowledge to the world.We can not isolated with the computer but have not to immerse on it.Everything has its limitation. In sum,Computer and man has been a whole configuration.They have interaction with each other permanent.

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