小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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my dog is a man. name is LinJin,it is a good dog.it always look beautiful woman on the electricity bike, it let me puzzled.come no it just my doy,but ins't like dog.oh oh oh i konw it 's single dog, oh my god,it's awful. that's my mistake,i never find a gril friend with it.