小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My dog is a male.Name is LinJin, it is a good dog.It always look beautiful woman on the electricity bike, it let me puzzled.Come no it just my doy, but ins't like dog.oh oh oh i konw it 's single dog, oh my god, it's awful.That's my mistake, i never find a gril friend with it.