小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a good dog,name is LinJin. It's my bast friend,it's always in the car to see beauty. I'm so puzzle,it's just a dog,a single dog,sorry that to say it's so cruel.I think all have i to do is find girl friend for it.But it look like ChouDiaoSi.ChouDiaoSi is a smart animal,ChouDiaoSi have a good face,all rigth i'm lie. it's have a girl friend,she name is MengHong,her beauty with the road girl.They loved each other!