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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3096
要求:
题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the economy,more and more people are making friends with online.In my opinion,it is wise to know many people by such ways.Not only we should not go out to make friends with,but we can also make friends with so many people. As far as i am concerned,when you communicate with people online,you can know more about that people,who may be a liar,but you would not in danger,just a communication.However,if you make friends in real society,maybe it is more dangerous,because you do not really know that person,just at first meet.What is more,computer is popular all over the world,the way we can make friends is various,such as qq,website,wechat and so on,which make our friends all around the world. In all,not only we can make friends in China,but also we can make many friends all over the world.

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