拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
With the development of the economy,more and more people are making friends with online.In my opinion,it is wise to know many people by such ways.Not only we should not go out to make friends with,but we can also make friends with so many people. As far as i am concerned,when you communicate with people online,you can know more about that people,who may be a liar,but you would not in danger,just a communication.However,if you make friends in real society,maybe it is more dangerous,because you do not really know that person,just at first meet.What is more,computer is popular all over the world,the way we can make friends is various,such as qq,website,wechat and so on,which make our friends all around the world. In all,not only we can make friends in China,but also we can make many friends all over the world.
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