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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8494
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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the importance of science and art With the development of society, more and more people gradually realise that the importance of science and art. As we known, science refers to the systematic and formulized knowledge which is accepted and applied genenrally. Art is features human's emotion and imanginary. inshort, art is a product of knowledge , emotion ,dream and conscience and represents the real and virtual world. In the modern world, if we want to move forward ,we must use the science and art reasonablely. It is a common scene that many products with high technology and science intrude into every corner of where we live,such as cell phone, digital camera and computer and so on. so

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