2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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We cannot consider ourselves well-educated and superior just because we are the fortunate ones who can go somewhere to study, thus looking down upon those who cannot get such golden chances as ours.It is a truth univer sally known that that a doctor is different from a black smith is not because the former has received higher education and the latter has not