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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分59.0分
评语:

很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication With the fsat growing of the internet,chatting on the internet bacome a normal phnonmone around us ,so interoersonal communication can be a difficulty that people shuld take concern of. As we all know,not only the internet can help us to keep couth with friends frequently but also increase chances for us to see our families thought the screen.but things have two sides,sometimes the time we communicate in the internet,the screats of ourself will be used by any other guys who tend to do illigle things.as a result,The security in the interent must be the first important ,in order to protect ourself and people surround us,it is nessissary to keep in mind. In my view of this,i absolutely admit the benifite we have got from the internet,but we still have to use it in a right way.

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