很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication With the fsat growing of the internet,chatting on the internet bacome a normal phnonmone around us ,so interoersonal communication can be a difficulty that people shuld take concern of. As we all know,not only the internet can help us to keep couth with friends frequently but also increase chances for us to see our families thought the screen.but things have two sides,sometimes the time we communicate in the internet,the screats of ourself will be used by any other guys who tend to do illigle things.as a result,The security in the interent must be the first important ,in order to protect ourself and people surround us,it is nessissary to keep in mind. In my view of this,i absolutely admit the benifite we have got from the internet,but we still have to use it in a right way.
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