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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The way of happiness As a notable saysing goes that "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them."to which ,I can not agree more.happiness deviate from dealing with problems . There are several examples can be illustrated to the point of view.My personal experience as a case .When I fall into a dillema of math practice,warm classmates take pressure with addressing it.although i know the answer,i do not happy.I should develop my capacity to tackle issues by myself. Therefore ,it is advisable to cultivate the ability of dealing with affairs.we had better think independly .Best of all ,broaden our fileds of knowedge ,knowedge is energy.in addition,challenging issues what ourselves think are impossible.
