2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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i`m very happy to learn you will come my hometown,i love my hometown Liu Pan Shui where have cool weather and dilicous food. first,i will take you to Feng Chi park,there is some water around many trees and flowers ,you can walk slowly the road to relax yourself in here. then around the park,we can eat special food lao guo,just fry food about anything we can eat . in the end,we can go to the national of trees park ,go skating is you favorite sport. i wish you have a good vacation.