拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
The impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication Before the Internet appeared,people always chat with others face to face.However,as time goes by,the Internet developed as soon as possible.People do not need to confront to someone for communication.They can use variety of applications. Nowadays,people used to talking to someone on Internet.It's convenient for them that can contact other person without region limitation.They can talk with anyone in anyplace on anytime.How a great progress it is.But in fact,though the way is getting simply,people's communication become difficult.People rarely connect to them friends even though they want to.And in spite of they have a large sum of chances to chat with their friends,they usually feel lonely indeed. For my perspective,I think the Internet is a good stuff let us talk easily.But if it let us forget how to communicate with our relative and friends,we should change the mind of Internet.The Internet has two sides in our communication.We should take the good one and develop the Internet value as much as possible.
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