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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中句子错误偏多了；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏；语言不流畅；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
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