题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust Trust may is one of the most foundmental quality in people's interactions. We all trend to have an equal treatment when we communicate with other.So when we want to get someone else's true heart,in addition,we also need pay for the honest to them. As my view, I always believe that trust is the most important character of one.From one side,between family members,the happiness family is not only let families share the life with each other,but also need loyal.Don't always suspect and doubtful with them.For another,we should maintain trust with our friend and always keep a consideration:Honest,begin with yourself.Only in this way can we have a qualify which someone else can equally bring us sincere. People need interactons,interactions need honest and trust.