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He is my best good friend who named bill .He is very important in my life.He likes sports,such as football ,basketball,swimming and so on.we often go out for dinner when we're not working.He prefer to fish ,meat and cake,and i like vegetable.Sometimes we are not in agreement in something.He always to confuse me .