小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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She is my new teacher who has long hairs and two big eyes.She is pretty beautiful.She teaches us english.Our classment like her very much.She likes to stay with us because she feels happy when we get together.Sometimes she cook some cake for us ,it is very delicious.She likes sports,such as running,jogging,yoga and swimming.She is very kind.I like her very much.