Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达较为多样,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,with the rapid development of science and technology,there are a lot of technologies appear in our lives.Some example,the cell phone has become very popular among all the people in the world. Now we can see that many people especially the young children are useing it everyday.Yes,of course,this kind of technology bring us lots of convenions.It help us communicate with each other more quickly.But evry coin has two sides.When we are on the street, we can find that most people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.How terrible the fact is!Because of overusing the cell phones,there are many bad things happened in our lives and bring us so mang sorrows. So far our future,so beautiful our world,let's be the owners of ourselves.Life is pricious,let's live our life in a safe good way.Time is also very pricious,let's make the most of time and do not spend too much on playing cell phones!
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