2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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First of all, i want to say, welcome to my hometown. today i will show you about our famous interestingplace HuangShang. As a proverb says "It's not a real man, if you don't visit the great wall ". As the same thing, if you visit to Anhui, but you don't clam the HuangShang montain,you wouldd not a real tourist.HuangShang beauty spot is 5A gread in china.Comfortable tempreture,good air,beautful scenery,witch all can make you feel like fairyland.There have hot spring,BeiHai scenic spot and so on.The Pine Greeting Guests is a aged live at a cilff, if you see that, it will spirit you and encrouge you to face hardship in our life and let you knowledge that our nature is amazing and suprising. Enjoy yourself in HuangShang,you will never regret.