2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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On my way home,it is raining heavily!It is good today.I learn that how to configure the siemens s7-400. my aunt must be thirty-five year old .in spite of this,she often wear black stocking and short stock and bright,orange-coloured dress.i look out of the widows,it is still rainning.Please make sure that you are available.