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I have a friend,she's Shanshan.She is my good friend.She's a nice girl and she have a good temper.And she has never qualler with me. She looks very beautifully.Shehas a long hair and big eyes and small mouth.She often likes smalling.When her smile like an angle.And she often help me in life. We are together to playing for everwhere,and we are talking about everything.And we like each other.