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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4836
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
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作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;有效的运用了一些复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

I assume that you are familar with the proverb,"Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them",which reveals the fact that the importance of the capacity of solving problems.Obviously,happiness is strongly associated with the ability of solving problems. Admittedly,no one can deny that the problems exist everywhere.the only way to solve it is to develop couterpart ability,which can help you solve problems.In ancient time,there was no computer,which can help you solve problems easily.Notwithstanding,so many problems had been solved.So what's the key to solve problems?though the answers might be different to each other,i thing it is the way of thinking,which is logical.Although the internet have brought many sophisticated tools,which we can find the answer easily,it provides the way to solve every problem.

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