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I assume that you are familar with the proverb,"Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them",which reveals the fact that the importance of the capacity of solving problems.Obviously,happiness is strongly associated with the ability of solving problems. Admittedly,no one can deny that the problems exist everywhere.the only way to solve it is to develop couterpart ability,which can help you solve problems.In ancient time,there was no computer,which can help you solve problems easily.Notwithstanding,so many problems had been solved.So what's the key to solve problems?though the answers might be different to each other,i thing it is the way of thinking,which is logical.Although the internet have brought many sophisticated tools,which we can find the answer easily,it provides the way to solve every problem.