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With the development of the internet technology,online shopping become increasingly popular in our daily life. Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons.For example,online shopping has a lot of advantages over going in person to the shops shoppers can check reviews and recommendations on the Internet before they make their desicions,without having someone sort of breathing down their necks.And,online shopping is truly convenient and global,people can buy they favorite products at any times from all over the wrold.Distance is no longer a problem.What's more,most sellers provide an exprss service,goods get delievered straight to the door quickly.Shoppers don't even need to step out of the house and go to the shops.They can stay at home with a nice cup of tea and do their shopping online. On the other hand,there are certain disadvantages too.When you buy someting online,you can't touch or feel them,so the quality is not so good as it looks.Some people don't buy stuff online because of security reasons.Compare to traditional shopping,online shopping is very easy for people to hack into sites and get details. On the whole,online shopping has a very bright future.Although it has many problems,it is one of the results of mordern society.There is a long way to go for us improve its service.
