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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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能够使用一些不错的从句;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Today the tread that judge a person by their appearance has become even more marked .people who are not good looking may develop a sense of inferiority and afraid of making feriends with others ,influencing their life in every aspects.We really do not should to judeg a person by their looking.It is universally understood that man's appearance is inversely proportional to IQ, let's take MA Yun for example, he has not attractive looking, but achieve a great achievements in the technological domain. If we judge a book by its cover, it will be a obstacle for our relationships' development. because we have no chance to really learn a person if we do so and ourselves will also not going to be undertood by others.last but not least, the beauty of the mind is the most important.

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