若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过拼写错误比较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nothing succeeds without a sthrong will Nothing succeed with a sthrong will is a proverb full of logic and wisdom,wich tell us thhat our fate is depended on our strong will rather than by god or others.Only when we standing on our own feets and continue to fit with a strong will can we survive hardships for a life-long time A strong will is promission to success. atheletes participating in National Games of the disabled.They are trained and practise hard with a strong will.Cherishing the importance of sthrong will,they rely on themseves to win others respect and admiration,and rewared. A person who have a sthrong will can achieve great mission. The famouse physicist Hawking is a tipicai example.Although he suffers from severe disease ,he has nerev abandoned himself and has a sthrong will all the time .Counting on his own efforts ,he carries on his study and has made great achievements. Students like us also should have a sthrong will .If you don't work hard,you will never be a useful person.