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Self-confidence Is a Key to Success As is known to all, self-confidence is very important to us. In my opinion, it is a key to success, because it can give us power, especially when we meet with difficulties. The more self-confidence we have, the more optimistic and stronger we are. However, some people around us don't have self-confidence. Facing with trouble and difficulties, they always complain or give up hopes, and some even don't want to have a try to find a solution. These people usually get nothing at last. For example, athletes who get the final success are always self-confident, while those who don't have self-confidence usually fail. Therefore,self-confidence is very essential to everybody. From now on, let's be self-confident and we can benefit from it largely.
