2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As we can see from the character date, it's vivied show us that education play an important part on our wage and unemployment rate. people who's education level decivide to who's wage. As the date , we can know the poeole who less than high school diploma only can gain 451 dollars. However ,the people who have the doctoral degree can gain 1551 dollars. That is the value of take high education.And we also can understand from the parture that is the people who take high education can easyly fund job than the people who take low education. As far as I am concerned, we shuold approve all of the people to take high ducation, because it can help them get moeny to improve their life quality.