2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a Green Campus Obviously,with the rapid economic development of China, creating a green campus do become more and more important. However, firstly ,we should focus on a green environment,as if we can protect it .But we can not only take notice of the environment of green,but also pay attention to other aspects.For exmple,a good study environment.it is general that a good environment will have a infliuence in students'grades, In order to creat a green campus ,surely ,we should make some measures.On the one hand,first of all ,we should protect the environment by ourself.On the other hand,only we can appeal other people to protect it ,and let them understand the importance of it.