2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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Obviously,now whenever and wherever we can see more and more museum open to the outside world.but why,there are some reasons follow.First of all,opening to the outside world do can make use full of these rousce,for exmple,many people can realize the national history,and learn more about the knowledge that are associated with national culture or other country's culture.What's a more,it can rapid develop the economy,so the coutry will become more and more stronger. Of course,it not only bring some benefits,but also some problems.On the one hand,some cultural relics will be damaged.On the other hand,it bring some environmental problem. On my opinion,the museum should be opened,but must take notice of protecting it.Only in this way ,we can do better