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My hometown is Beijing which is the captial city of china.I were amazied when I heard that my best foreign friend will come here and visit my family.To impress many fine momeries in my friend mood,I had calculated a perfect plan on this short vacation. First of all,I decided to clame the Changcheng with my friend vary from his mood and energe.The most important reason is that there is a historical word called "a man who not clame the Changcheng isn't a great person".Although he was particularly tired,he still feel so unbelieveble when he saw the view of the Beijing.The second day,we began to eat the delicious Beijing food.I thought he might not used to eat the chinese food at the begin of taste chinese food,but at the end I found not only he perfect to eat those,but also he said that he didn't want to leave those restaurant if there is some oppotunities.The last spot but not the least,we were going to The Tian'an Men.He told me that he love china and he want to stay in the China a part of time in the future.
