雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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With the development of modern high technology, and the improvement of diplomatic of countries, people can go out more and more convenient. In the past, if we want to go to other countries, we need to offer a lots of information to embassy. Sometimes, we also need to through a check by our goverment. It make people go to foreign countries difficult. But now, it's changed. So, more and more people choose go to other countries to have a travel. Somebody think it will bring positive effect to people and country, some people think it will development negative effect. In my opinion, about people go to other countries to travel, I think positive effect is greater than negative. People can know many different cultures each others when we go to different countries. We can see plenty of landscapes which have special of local. It can open our view and help people to understand different race people. So, I think that people will development more positive effects after we go to other countries to have a travel. In addition, people will become more friendly and peaceful by this, I think.