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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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The picture above is a vivid description of the phenomenon that with advance sience and technology have no one pay attention to education.Although the Internet has changed the avenue of acquire knowledge,I don't think the Internet can take place education. Firstly,education can develop our creative thinking.It is Internet can't give us.Secondly,education not only help us acquire knowledge but also teach us how to acquire knowledge.As a chinese proverb gose,"Give a man fish and you feed him for a day;teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime."Last but not least,the course of acquire important than acquire knowledge. To sum up,admittdly,Internet play a increasingly role in our life,but it can never replace education.

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