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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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The picture above is a vivid description of the phenomenon that with advance science and technology have no one pay attention to education.Although the Internet has changed the way of acquire knowledge,I don't think the Internet can take place education. Firstly,education can develop our creative thinking.It is Internet can't give us.Secondly,education not only help us acquire knowledge but also teach us how to acquire knowledge.As a chinese proverb gose,"Give a man fish and you feed him for a day;teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime."Last but not least,the way of study is essential to everyone. To sum up,Internet play an increasingly important role in our life,but it can never replace education.

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