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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(58):升学压力

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要求:

高三年级是高中生活的最后一年, 这一年中,学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此,很多学生课间也坐教室里用功,但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们:适当的休息很有必要。现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题,按下列要点写一篇短文,让这些同学从中有所启发。

要点如下:

1.十分钟的课间休息很有必要。
2.要注意适当的休息方式。

3.你是怎样利用这十分钟的。


注意:

①开头已经给出,不计入总数;②词数100左右。


A Ten-minute Break
       As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited.
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A Ten-minute Break As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. In order to get into a first-class university or college, many student make great effort to study. The pressure is so high that lots of students don't have a rest in the break. However, their grade is not as good as they expected. Because of their tiredness, they don't study efficiently. Therefore, I think the break is extremely important to them, so they should have a break but not study. Everybody needs break after working or studying for a long time. There are many kinds of ways to rest. For example, we can go out to do some exercise, or have a talk some interesting things with our classmates, and so on. Only in this way, can we get refreshment to continue our study. As far as I'm concerned, in the ten-minute break, I always listen to my favorite music after going to washing room. Sometimes, I choose to play jokes with my classmates, which is very beneficial to me. Let's make full use of the short break.

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