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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4833
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Along with the development of society,the economy has increased in multiple.Notwithstanding,the perceive of happiness never catches up with the development.The cognitive of happiness should be more specifying.As the saying goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." It seems individuals have reached a consensus that,the more money you have,the more happy you are.By contrast,(on the contrary)•happiness' doesn't cater to that fact.just as XU SHANG DUO said,"life is full of problems,when you solve the one,the others will follow next.Therefore,the essential to be happy is to develop problem-solving ability.In addition,we should abandon the stereotype that the more money you have,the more happy you are.Only with the right conception can we live happier. Given the fact I have just stated,we can deduce that problem-solving ability is the essential to happiness.How can we to mould this ability? Here are some tips:Firstly,describe the problem you encounter specify,explicit,and simplicity.Throughout the duration,you will know the target ,which you desire to cope with, more clearly . Secondly, analyze the reasons which may trigger the problem.In this phase,you can figure out the origins of problems.Lastly,solve the reason and take a action.Through intervening the process of problem-forming,we can solve the problem and then be happy .

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