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Along with the development of society,the economy has increased in multiple.Notwithstanding,the perceive of happiness never catches up with the development.The cognitive of happiness should be more specifying.As the saying goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." It seems individuals have reached a consensus that,the more money you have,the more happy you are.By contrast,happiness doesn't cater to that fact.Just as XU SHANG DUO said,"life is full of problems,when you solve the one,the others will follow next.Therefore,the essential to be happy is to develop problem-solving ability.In addition,we should abandon the stereotype that the more money you have,the more happy you are.Only with the right conception can we live happier. Given the fact I have just stated,we can deduce that problem-solving ability is the essential to happiness.How can we to form this ability?The reply is simple:practice.As the proverb saying,practice makes perfect,which reveals the crucial of practice.Therefore,how to practice can we be proficient in solving problems.Here are some tips:Firstly,when you confront the problem,you should set a mind in your heart that you can handle it.Only by this way can you have courage to challenge.Secondly,analyze the reasons which may trigger the problem.In this phase,you can figure out the origins of problems.Lastly,through practicing not only can you be happy when you conquered the problem,but you can help others and gain happiness from the process.Hardly have you shorten the way to happiness when you get this ability.
